Requesting the background to be made to look like more of a Tokyo love hotel setting, please.
Changing part of the bed to look more like they're fucking closer to the edge would help show more of it, instead of the massive 'poof' the futon has in the way.
So long as she keeps her pillow, i'd be happy with the full piece being changed aside from them.

Also, I have some colour preferences for it below to help with that side of it.

Also, here's the PNG version with a higher filesize and quality to work with
https://files.catbox.moe/xcy1ah.png