>>22172020The lack of explicit scenes is because I wanted to write it as an ecchi series like 'Nana and Kaoru', which while erotic don't go into the explicit details either. I also saw it as a challenge after my previous stories where I did go into explicit details.
The part about the parents is fair. I wanted to show two perspectives parents could have regarding their now adult children's interest, as well as further contextualize Haruto's root of initial lack of sexual interest considering his parents. I guess the last chapter did the whole parental thing better.
As for the gym part: I am still at the beginning of my Gym visits, so that is where my bias comes in. I also did have him say that he is 'not feeling it today' and the whole thing is viewed from Haruto's perspective for whom 70 kg sounds ridiculous to press casually.
>I stood agog as he added not 5, not 10, but 20 kilo to each side. “How much is that…”>“About 70 kilo with the handle… I usually do more but I am not feeling it today…”>“Yeah…” I imagined my arms breaking like twigs if I had to press such a weight.Would be adding 30 to 50 kg be more believable as a 'casual bench press'? Or should it be even more?
But all in all thank you for reading it and giving your honest opinion. I appreciate it very much.
