>>5702589thats a good point.
>>5702651 I wouldnt call that one a finished peice by any stretch,. But yeah, if you check the thread, I posted that one right after an earlier version. I redrew it after seeing one of boneman's submissions and realizing how static and boring my shit was looking so I treid redrawing both poses.
>>5703166huh I couldn't tell! Yeah I was gonna make some brush suggestions but seeing your linework I don't think you need to hear any of it. It's already going in a really good direction imo, the only nit I would pick is I think it's losing some of its energy and structure from the rough to the clean lineart so I think what I might try is just another intermediate stage to really work out the smaller forms sp you can focus on gesture in the cleanup
>>5703203beautiful linework
>>5702492the reason it looks like that is I first drew the first panel and colored it then decided to expand into the two-page spread, so I pasted the first panel in afterwards. I havent worked oin the color treatment for the full page yet.